Archive for April, 2007

30
Apr

A couple of splinters

No sooner do I cry uncle figuring I’m never going to figure out how to put up a decent myspace page, along come a couple of splinters, namely crimespace and coffeetimeromance–two new social networking communities that focus on–you guessed it crime and romance writing respectively. Truthfully, I like the idea of idea of communicating with folks who are interested in what I’m interested in, as opposed to dabbling in some vast community and hoping folks come to visit. However, how many networks am I going to have to join? If I join for crime and romance, then I’ll have to find a network for crime/romance and one for black folks and the one just for women I’ve been invited to and one for Bronxites and one for mom’s being driven crazy by their teenage sons who all of a sudden swear they are grown.

Is all this online socializing a blessing or a curse. I’ll be damned if I know, but right now I’ve got to go have dinner face to face with the rest of my family. Now that’s scary.

29
Apr

5 Things to do after you write The End and before you address the envelope

One of the questions most frequently asked of me by aspiring authors is how do you know when your book is done. Here’s my most frequent answer: when you are so sick of thinking about it that you’d rather burn the whole thing up than look at it again. Most of the time I get a laugh with this answer, but I also realize a lot of folks have a much lower threshold for literary pain than I do, so I’d better come up with a better answer.

Realistically speaking, your book is finished when you have improved it as much you, at this moment in time, are able to. Sure, in a couple years time you’re going to look back at this first effort, whether or not it finds a publisher, and find gaping swiss cheese holes in your work. Why? Because as you continue to learn your craft and gain experience you don’t make the same rookie mistakes any more.

But if you think you’re finished, try these tips for a more polished manuscript.

1. Congratulate yourself for getting this far in the process. Consider this: the main reason why some writers get published and others don’t is that the published people finish their books. Celebrate in a way that makes you feel good about being a writer.

2. Put the book down. Step away from the book. Oftentimes we become so entrenched in the work we no longer see it objectively. If possible, leave it alone for a good two or three weeks while you work on something else. Don’t even think about it, or if you can’t keep it off your mind, jot down any thoughts or changes you are thinking of making.

3. Now’s the time to get some feedback from your support team, if that’s something you want to do. More than likely, friends and family will be so impressed you wrote a book, all you’ll hear is wonderment and praise. Lap it up and store it for later. When the rejections start coming in, you’ll need the sense memory of all those accolades to tide you over. If you receive any criticism that you feel will help your book, apply it to the manuscript when you revisit it.

4. Now is also the time to get your stationery, business cards and what have you in order. You may not think this has anything to do with writing your book, but you are almost ready to take off that creative hat and put on a business suit. If you want someone to look at your masterpiece favorably you have to present it in the most professional, polished way possible. And in a way, this too is part of celebrating yourself as a writer–having the trappings of a professional.

5. Go back to your book with new eyes. Read it through one time without making any changes. Read it as if you were someone new to your work. Does the story flow and make sense? Have you told the story you thought you were telling? Are the characters compelling? Is the timeline on the book correct? Are there any continuity errors? If you have the major issues licked, move onto the minor ones. Polish text, as needed. Do a search and replace for words you overuse. Print out your manuscript and hunt for typos and incorrect word uses that the spell check misses.

Now you are ready to send our baby into the world. Fire up the printer and have at it. Good luck!

29
Apr

Maybe it’s just me, but . . .

Okay, it’s been a little while since I had to do an agent search and even longer than that since I was a new author with no clue just a sase sending out my manuscript, but . . . it never occurred to me that writer’s getting a rejection would receive a letter back without their name on it. Huh? you say. I know, I don’t think that made sense exactly, so I’ll be specific.

The other day, an aspiring writer friend of mine got back her first two rejections from agents–one was via e-mail and one a regular snail mail letter. The snail mail letter was addressed to Dear Author.

My first thought was, you’ve got to be kidding me. As much trouble as writers go through to get the agent’s name right, to send only what the agent wants to see how he or she wants to see it, don’t they deserve better than to have their work declined by saying basically “hey you, no thanks”? Harsh!

I know agents are busy and must devote their time to the clients whose work actually makes money for them. I not suggesting the abolition of the form letter, but, Jeez, couldn’t there be a spot to scrawl the authors name on the top of the page, or a mail merge thingie whereby a name could be easily inserted or how about leaving off the salutation entirely?

Such is the life of a writer, I suppose. As my grandmother would say, let that be the worst thing that happens to you. I wish you the same.

25
Apr

Another Take on the Virginia Tech shooting

Tess says it all here. There’s no need for me to embellish.

25
Apr

And you think you have it hard at the office

Pity poor Mike Daisey. Not only is he named after . . . a flower (you have to read Kevin Henkes to get that one) but part of his audience takes a powder in the middle of his show. Sorry, dude, but the expression on your face is worth sitting through the 10 minutes of the clip. Turns out it was a Christian group protesting his use of the f-word among other offenses in his act.

Speaking of Christians and civil disobedience (and I use that term loosely here) I have long since lost my religion but many years ago in Catholic high school I had this teacher that was fond of showing us films on that crappy projector thing that always broke. All of us were required to wear jackets to school. So one day during a film, we all got up at precisely the same time, took our jackets off, slung them on the back of our chairs and sat down. Ten minutes later, we all got up, put our jackets back on and sat. Now there’s a silent protest for ya. I, of course, had nothing to do with the planning of that. Nothing whatsoever. We didn’t see any more films after that, however, so my work was done. He he he.

24
Apr

Inspired Casting?

Being a longtime fan of mindless TV, I’ve been glued to Dancing With the Stars for the last couple of years. There’s nothing wrong with the show, but if you expect to use any cerebral parts of the brain while watching you’ll be disappointed.

Or so I thought until the show’s group swing number. Watching boxing champ Laila Ali swing poor little Apolo Anton Ohno around an idea came to me. Wouldn’t Laila be the perfect Zaria Fuentes from Forbidden Games?

I can imagine the confusion in your eyes as you read this. Zaria who? She’s the nearly six-foot half black/half Puerto-Rican cop heroine of FG, coming out 2/08. She and Laila have alot in common:

Laila is a big girl, ditto Zaria
Laila likes to fight, Zaria kicks some serious behind
Laila is a stunning beauty, Zaria (according to her hero) is a knockout
Laila likes the Latin dances, Zaria was born to them, though she doesn’t cut any rugs in the book
Laila doesn’t take any crap from her male counterpart, neither does Zaria

See what I mean about a perfect fit? So if you’re out there listening Laila and you want to take it from boxing to dancing to acting, give me a call. I’ve got a role for you.

23
Apr

Vibrant Voices–Dera R. Williams

I “met” Dera Williams through a writing workshop that I was coordinating through Author Supporting Authors Positively. I knew of her as a tough-but-fair reviewer for Affaire de Coeur. I didn’t know the sister could write in her own right. I tell you this in the hopes that Dera will do what they say in New Jersey–finish the damn book! In the meantime she tells us what she loves about the work of others.

Black Literature-What Else but Positive

When Dee asked me to contribute my positive viewpoints about Black literature as a reviewer, I could only think, what else is there but positive about our writing? I thought I would expound from my vantage point of not only a reviewer, but also, as a writer and genealogist/historian.

As the family griot, the appointed collector of stories, I am responsible for the family reunion year book and keeper of the archives. The Black Diaspora is rich with stories and I have read many books that prove this point. Most recently I read Red River by Lalita Tademy, who gives a historical fiction account of her paternal line in Post Reconstruction Louisiana. It was the thirst for knowledge of her ancestors’ past that led Tademy to research and write about the Colfax Massacre.

Though I am a Cali girl, my heart and my roots are deep-seated in the Southern traditions of the past. A perfect reading moment for me is a cup of Blackberry Sage tea, a comfy quilt and my favorite corner of the couch, reading a book about Southern characters. As a reader, I crave these courageous stories that inspire, encourage and qualify our place in the global universe. History is my passion and I will take it in any form; mysteries, nonfiction, biographies or romance.

As a reviewer, I certainly enjoy being entertained and taken away from the real world for a few hours by romantic tales. But on the same level, I like to be educated in my reading. And, I have been informed by the genre of romance where I learned from Doris Johnson about the political issues regarding organ transplants in the African American community; the intricacies of the wine industry from Janice Sims; and the foreshadowing of suspense from Deirdre Savoy. Of course, who can give Black history lessons better than Beverly Jenkins with her historical romances?

As a reviewer, I do not succumb to the negative prattle about certain genres because I so believe in the power of our stories and the intrinsic value in all of them. Do I have my preferences? Of course I do. But there is significance in the urban/street lit that inform about the hard-knock life, as well as stories about our folk who come from nuclear, traditional families, Cosby-like, and all in between. They are all valid. The beautiful thing is there is not just one Black Experience, one way of living, loving and learning; therefore there are hundreds of ways to tell our stories.

All any writer can do, is to write the best book they can, from his or her soul, that hopefully will appeal to the audience intended and if fortunate, be embraced by others who are intrigued by a darn, good story. There is a lesson to take note, realizing not any one writer can be all things to all people. Most importantly, as writers we should write the stories we want to read and readers will be led to find us.

Dera R. Williams
April 20, 2007

Please leave a comment to let Dera know how much you enjoyed her post. You can read some of her reviews at Affaire de Coeur and get the 411 on books and authors at Dera’s Den.

21
Apr

Oh no they di-in’t

It must just be coincidence that I am at the moment listening to Billy Joel’s You May Be Right (I may be crazy), but the folks at Funny When Wet must surely have lost their minds. Inviting all to show they are not offended by words (I know they are not talking to me), they have a line of Nappy Headed Ho gear available for purchase. I refuse to provide a link, but you can find it the way someone else suggested to me, by googling the three words in question. Someone needs their non-nappy head examined for this.

21
Apr

Can I Get a Witness?

It just goes with the territory when you are a published author that you are going to get a lot of mail from un- or newly published folks wanting your input on what they’re doing. I have to admit I’m remiss in answering this type of mail. Someone will send me an e-mail asking me something. By the time I find the information or formulate my response I can no longer find what I did with the e-mail–most often because I’ve neglected to save it. Anyway, I’m sure there are a few folks out there cursing my name for being unresponsive and I’ve often kicked myself too for just that infraction. But hey, I work every day, I’ve got three kids if you count the big one (don’t tell him I said that), I have my own writing, deal with it. Write me again and ask again. I rarely don’t answer because I have no intention of doing so.


That being said, I kept getting mail for some book called GHETTONATION. Y’all know how I feel about ghetto, so I was trying very hard to ignore this since I don’t have the time to check out every book promo sent to me. But thanks to the good folks on Tee C. Royal’s Rawsistaz yahoo group I was led to this article about the book written by Cora Daniels.

My appreciation for Ms. Daniels’ work starts with her definition of ghetto. As described in the article:

…ghetto isn’t a neighborhood. Ghetto doesn’t just affect a certain race or economic class (we like to think that have-nots are ghetto and the haves are ghetto-free). To Daniels, ghetto is a mentality to “aim low.” The ghetto persona devalues education, thinks in the short-term rather the long-term, lacks self-respect, and celebrates the worst (African American) stereotypes.

Sound familiar? That’s what I and other bloggers decrying the new wave of ghetto fiction have been saying from its inception. The article continues:

…Daniels discusses her own ghetto mentality. She explores how corporate America exploits ghettoness as a means to make money despite its disturbing ramifications. She calls out rappers who take on a ghetto persona despite the fact that they were raised in a privileged family. She talks to people who embrace ghetto because its the in thing to do and she chats with people who realize that a ghetto mentality is self-defeating. She talks about bad parents (young and old) who dabble in the art of ghetto.

This reminds me of a book signing I had at the beginning of my career in a very affluent suburb of New York. The young woman who approached my table said she wasn’t interested in my book. All she read was street lit. When I asked why that was, she replied that it was more real for her than romance. And here I was thinking this chick lives in a nicer area than I do, probably lives in a bigger house than I do, yet she identifies with the ghetto. There’s something out of whack with that.

Looks like I’m going to have to give this book a try, as soon as I get my TBR pile into some sort of manageable level. Oh, well.

20
Apr

Writing Workshop Reminder

Time is winding down for registration, so I thought I’d give you a reminder buzz. Here’s the full skinny on the writing course:

Spring into Writing Workshop is now accepting students!!!

National bestselling, award winning author Deirdre Savoy will be facilitating this month-long workshop set to begin the week of April 30th. This workshop is designed to cover writing basics with an eye to finishing/revising that one of a kind novel:

Course syllabus:

April 30: Theme, premise and conflict: The basics of novel structure.
May 7: Characterization and plot: cast your novel/plan your story.
May 14: Getting over the hump: how to keep tension and drama building throughout your story.
May 21: Finishing up: tying up loose ends/finding the just-right ending.

Each week, a lecture and assignment will be posted. Completion and posting of assigned work for peer review is not mandatory but advised if students want to get the most from the class.

Who should take this course:

–first time authors just getting started
–writers close to completing that first novel
–any author interested in taking their writing to new levels

How to register: Apply for group membership here. You will receive a student questionnaire and told how to make payment. Once tuition is received, you will be added to the group.

Tuition: $40. for members/$50 for non-members (plus processing fee of $2.00).

Hope to see you in class!!!





Get into your most comfortable reading chair, take off your shoes, turn off the phone and let Ms. Savoy's incredible talent take you away. --Debra Ross, Romance in Color

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